柳州市政府网英文版值得扩大选题

柳州市政府网的英文版http://english.yun.liuzhou.gov.cn,新闻栏目叫“Picture News”,也就是都是图片新闻。

第一,从选题来看,均为财经新闻,而且东风汽车新闻较多;个别新闻不适合翻译为英语,比如一篇报道是说柳州市被CCTV的几个栏目报道了多次。 建议适当扩充其它领域,特别是一些政策的解读等。

第二,从风格来看,都是中文新闻的直译。比如其中一篇“风行T5 EVO狂飚版试驾会”的新闻,很多空洞范范的描述http://english.yun.liuzhou.gov.cn/en_news/en_lznews/en_picnews/t19700101_3271913.shtml It is understood that since its launch, Forthing T5 EVO has quickly gained numerous fans.  这篇新闻自始至终都是用Forthing T5 EVO作主语,其实可以用the electric car, the latest model by Dongfeng等来代替的。

 第三,关于节点设置方面,目前关于柳州的介绍,只有短短两个段落,太少了http://english.yun.liuzhou.gov.cn/en_aboutlz/en_klz/en_introduction/202208/t20220818_3120855.shtml

里面的介绍也有待改善,比如这句话,The industrial proportion ranks first in Guangxi, accounting for 1/4 of the total industry of Guangxi.,实际上可以改为The industrial output value of Liuzhou City accounted for one-fourth the total in Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region. 或者Liuzhou City contributed one-fourth of the industrial output value in the Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region. 柳州市工业产值占广西壮族自治区工业产值的四分之一

那么,如何简单介绍一座城市呢?ChatGPT给出的答案是:

Name of the City:  

Location:  

Size and Population 

Historical Background

Cultural Significance

Economic Profile 

Tourism Highlights: 

Infrastructure and Transportation

Unique Features:  

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